Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
TEST TAKER'S RESPONSE.
With the rapid development of technology, the advanced transportation system enables people to migrate between areas and countries. The question arises as to whether it is good to move to a new place. From my perspective, it seems To be faced with (cause) lot (lots) of problems, but also benefits people a lot.
Some people argue that when people move to a new place they would lose old friends. However, it is definitely not the fact because moving to a new places (place) means we can gain valuable (new) friendship (friendships) besides old friends. This can be exemplified by my own experience. I used to live in a small town in (the) South of China, where is (a place) quite timid. When I had to attend high school, I moved to a big city for better education. During the time that I lived in the city, I also contacted with (Omit) my old friends and I made several new friends who share same hobbies with me (with whom we share the same hobbies). Apparently, it is not because of moving to a new places (place) but losing contact alienates people who used to be intimate. Additionally, moving to a new place can bring us a lot of opportunities to meet various people who are potential to be our (Omit it) friends.
Furthermore, moving to a new place or a country may broaden our eyesight( insight) and improve some skills of us (enhances our skills). For instance, once my aunts (aunt) planed to study in the US (United States), she forced herself to communicate with others in English, thus, enhancing her ability of communication. After she (Omit it) accepted (accepting) the offer of (at) Stanford, she went to America for further education. Attributing (Owing) to the advanced facilities in the laboratory, she worked well in US (United States) and made great achievements in her research. Without moving to a new place, she could not have improve (improved) her communication skills and make such accomplishments.
In conclusion, moving to a new places (place) can be risky because we may lose old friends. However, the (Omit it) technology is advanced so we can easily contact with (Omit it) old friends on the Internet. The problem can be easily addressed. Besides, we can gain lot (lots) of useful skills and make new friends (friends) when we move to a new place and make efforts to adapt to the new environment.
RATER'S RESPONSE.