The diagram presented describes the process of producing caboirnated water. Summarize the process in 150 words.
TASK RESPONSE.
The given diagram elaborates the production process of carbonated drinks.
Generally, the process takes five stages, from filtering raw water and addition of carbon dioxide to mixing additional ingredients, and finally packaging of the final product and taken to supermarkets for consumption.
The first stage, raw water is filtered through a filter for cleaning before water softener and chemicals are added. The cleaned water is pumped into an electric heater from which the vapor is directed through a cooling pipe to a trough where carbon dioxide is added for carbonization. The carbonated water is led through a long pipe to the third stage, the mixing tank, where it is mixed with coloring, syrup and flavors. From here it is filtered and directed to the fourth stage.
During the fourth stage, filtered water is filled in bottles and cans, packed in boxes and finally transported by trucks to supermarkets as final carbonated drinking water.
NOTE:
1- The introduction comes first. It gives a hint on what is presented in the diagram.
The given diagram elaborates the production process of carbonated drinks.
2- The overall statement follows the introduction. This gives a general outlook of the whole process.
Generally, the process takes five stages, from filtering raw water and addition of carbon dioxide to mixing additional ingredients, and finally packaging of the final product and taken to supermarkets for consumption.
3- The description of the process is made. Note that the essay describes the process in achronological way, from its first stage to the last. Never mix up the stages.
The first stage, raw water is filtered through a filter for cleaning before water softener and chemicals are added. The cleaned water is pumped into an electric heater from which the vapor is directed through a cooling pipe to a trough where carbon dioxide is added for carbonization. The carbonated water is led through a long pipe to the third stage, the mixing tank, where it is mixed with coloring, syrup and flavors. From here it is filtered and directed to the fourth stage.
During the fourth stage, filtered water is filled in bottles and cans, packed in boxes and finally transported by trucks to supermarkets as final carbonated drinking water.
4- Note the language used, the passive voice. This is because the essay is describing how something is done naturally.